Feb 17, 2010

haiku from mars and venus

i told Al i had condensed his poem into a haiku as follows:

our tracks up the hill -
my long sweet life with deb
even as new snow falls
he responded that it might be more like this:
Rabbit ripped from life
Fox dripping blood
My love is not like that

this reminds me of trying to create a skit with HBA, best described in this:



  1. Footprints in the snow
    The snow melts away in time
    The footprints remain