Nov 17, 2011

sky kine

in the morning mist
black cows fly through the trees
above the river

                            ~ mudpie

the problem with this haiku, dear mudpie, is that when you are famous and your haiku are in anthologies, this one will be corrected to say "black crows fly through the trees" by someone who assumes that "cows" is a typo.  and i suppose the title will be corrected to "sky king."


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